I actually liked my rhetorical analysis essay. Through peer editing, I understand what changes need to be done. I am proud of my overall paper though. For this progression essay, I took more time writing the essay. It gave me time to review it myself before I turned it in on Thursday. Doing that, I think I did much better than if I would've put it off last minute because this essay required time in order to complete a proper analysis. I really liked this progression, but I think people thought that the movements chosen, represented the group presenting. I noticed that when groups would go up to present those opposed to the movement spoke on their side of the movement. The whole point was to inform, not persuade. So, this progression was kind of controversial, but a great experience. I enjoyed this progression and how invested some groups got. If I had more time with my essay, it probably would've came out the same to be honest. Like I said, I am proud of my overall essay, but now through peer editing, I know what needs to be done and will take that into consideration when I complete my final draft. As for a revision of this essay, I still am not sure. Depending on my grade, I just might. And if I do, I will most definitely not lag on getting to the LRC!